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baby troubles part 5 vegeta get's his

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kakorot was failoley asleep and raditz laid him down next to vegeta  vegeta:goo goo gaga[yes now's my chance] than vegeta cried as loud as he could but kakorot did not wake up vegeta:gaga whaaaaaaaaaaaa![what he's still asleep noooooooooooooo!!!!!] vegeta cried even louder raditz:what is  wrong vegeta? tarble goo goo gaga gago goo poo[he's faking you idots!!!!!!!!!!!!!!] then raditz look at vegeta's diaper which was full  raditz: vegeta needs a change turles your turn turles: no way i won't vegeta:goo gaga wah![your change me if i tell you too change me!!!!!] raditz: turles i already changed one now you will turles: but i don't know how raditz:i'll walk ya thru it turles well ok but never again
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ABAlex's avatar
Not bad so far but watch punctuation. Usually speech is marked with quotation marks, and each time a new person speaks a new chapter is begun. This would make it a bit easier to read and understand.